Musical Girl

Thank ya'll so much! I personally kinda hate this poem. It's really bad, but yes, I wrote it to have a little humor in it (So Marnie, yes! It was ...

Thank ya'll so much! *and yes, I do know ya'll isnt really a word. but I'm from the south, what do you expect?* And yes, Pirate, I actually did enter ...

ok, thank you. i've never pictured them as lyrics, i just pictured me writing my sorrows of the 3 minutes i wrote this in that format. and since it did ...

suffocating drowning unable to move I'm dead. I should be numb I'm wasting away in a make-shift coffin aren't these supposed to be bug proof? well, mine isn't I cant ...

i liked it. of course, the fact that "girls suck" kinda hurt me a little, but im getting past that. on the first line, i think you should add at ...

This poem was amazing....even though i didn't quite understand all of what you were saying. The whole Shakespearean theme was a good choice for this. This is a very complexly ...

When i'd scream you would just run away when i'd cry out you never stayed by my side were you there for me like i thought or were you just ...

This is a really good poem. It leaves the reader to figure out what you're talking about as they read it, and then at the end, you still don't really ...

Why can't anyone sing for joy anymore? Where have all their voices gone? I need to find myself again, And I can't do that without the world's songs. I need ...

wow. now i feel normal. im not the only one who writes really good scary poems. yay! *jumps around and doesnt feel crazy anymore* i like teh end rhymes in ...

i liked this. it was really good. are you going to finish it? or can i just not find the next part??

oh my gosh. im crying! that is so full of emotion. and its how i feel all the time. im so sorry if thats how you feel too. its very ...

ok, im not going to get into my religion either. cuz then i would be sitting here arguing about it for teh rest of eternity and a day. but let ...

wow. someone either must've made you very mad, and you were pretending that was them, or you have an amazing imagination. i love it. the last line is my favorite. ...

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